It's not bad, and it picks up as it goes along. The biggest problem is just the structure though, seeing the characters off doing their own things for a whole episode isn't as funny as seeing them all together.
Also Awkward Smile doesn't like anything, and yes, John does like everything. You guys should become roommates and then wacky situations will ensue.
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